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Response Methodology Optimization and Artificial Neural Network Modeling for the Removal of Sulfamethoxazole Using an Ozone–Electrocoagulation Hybrid Process

Molecules 2023, 28(13), 5119; https://doi.org/10.3390/molecules28135119
by Nguyen Trong Nghia 1, Bui Thi Kim Tuyen 2, Ngo Thi Quynh 2, Nguyen Thi Thu Thuy 2, Thi Nguyet Nguyen 1, Vinh Dinh Nguyen 2,* and Thi Kim Ngan Tran 3,*
Reviewer 1: Anonymous
Reviewer 3: Anonymous
Molecules 2023, 28(13), 5119; https://doi.org/10.3390/molecules28135119
Submission received: 14 May 2023 / Revised: 6 June 2023 / Accepted: 12 June 2023 / Published: 29 June 2023

Round 1

Reviewer 1 Report

The paper is well-conceived and presented, and provides a comprehensive study on the optimization and modeling of the O-EC system for sulfamethoxazole removal. There are a few minor issues found that could be addressed to improve its quality.

Line 4: Introduce the abbreviation for sulfamethoxazole in abstract

lines 40-42. The references should be included to support the statement that SMX is challenging to remove from water using conventional processes

line 61. correct “reactions to form hydroxyl radials…”

line 67. Introduce COD abbreviation

-brief mention should be given about the energy requirements and efficiency of the proposed electrochemical method compared to other treatment options

Minor typographical errors and few grammar issues.

For example, in abstract:

"The data predicted by ANN model were matched well to the experimental data." should be "The data predicted by the ANN model matched well with the experimental data."

"The removal mechanism involved various processes such as oxidation..." should be "The removal mechanism involves various processes"

etc.

 

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Reviewer 2 Report

What is the novelty and originality of this work? Which should be clarified in the introduction

The abstract section lacks background and a gap

The conclusion section is insufficient

The quality of figure 3 should be improved

One of the main criticisms is that a synthetic matrix was used, and the concentrations that were evaluated are not the typical ones found in bodies of water.

The electrocoagulation process is also not scientifically novel and its effectiveness has been proven in other publications. There is no comparison between this method and other more conventional options. So it is difficult to know if there would be any advantage in using this method.

Only one reference from the Molecules journal was added, therefore it does not present relevance with this journal

Therefore, I cannot recommend the submitted manuscript is published in Molecules in this way.

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Reviewer 3 Report

The authors choose a very interesting topic. The removal of various substances, especially antibiotics, is of high interest. Not removing the antibiotics from waste waters can lead to resistant bacteriae. They made a quite Introduction section, but I would like to suggest giving more recent references than those cited (between 2008 and 2011). In Line 224, should it be Faraday's law instead of Farafay's? For conclusion I state this is a very decent paper. Therefore I would like to suggest to be accepted

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Round 2

Reviewer 2 Report

the authors responded to each of the comments in a satisfactory manner

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