Sleep Disturbances and Mental Well-Being of Preschool Children during the COVID-19 Pandemic in Mexico

Round 1

Reviewer 1 Report

page 8-line 240-241, is difficult to understand. Are the authors trying to say that the use of tablets close to bedtime resulted in a lack of motionless sleep that could signal an effect on deep sleep, which in turn affects neurophysiological phenomena?

If this is the case, I suggest rewording. 

Mean/average and standard deviation is conventionally represented as mean+/- SD in medical literature. Std is used more in engineering. (Table 1)

The authors mention that 43.2% of children were in the third year of kindergarten. Did the years in school make a difference to the sleep patterns? Did children in the first year of kindergarten have less problems than the ones in the third year?

Author Response

We are very grateful, and thank you for your kind comments that have enriched our paper.  Please see the attachment. 

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Reviewer 2 Report

This study, based on a small sample of children, analyses the impact of confinement on the sleep of young children. There are many studies on this issue, but the authors do not take into account and therefore do not analyse the key factors of this problem. The only originality of the study is the objective measurement by actimetry. It should be coupled with a post-covid measurement of the same children to be particularly relevant. As such all the introduction and conclusion should be rewritten to reflect the current literature, otherwise a "short communication" format would be sufficient to describe the actimetry data that supports the current literature. 

1. Introduction :

 

Major concerns : I advise to rewrite the introduction by orienting the argument on the one hand to a comprehensive literature review and on the other hand to focus on the need for confirmation of previous observations by objective measurements.

“Nowadays, there are some limitations in pre-pandemic and pandemic existing sleep 59 studies, such as the underrepresentation of preschool children's sleep data.”

Author do not know the literature :

•           Lecuelle, F., Leslie, W., Huguelet, S., Franco, P., & Putois, B. (2020). Did the COVID-19 lockdown really have no impact on young children's sleep? Journal of Clinical Sleep Medecine, 16(12):2121. (IF-2019: 3.6)

•           Anders R., Lecuelle F., Perrin C., Ruyter S., Franco P., Huguelet S., Putois, B. (2021). The Interaction between Lockdown-Specific Conditions and Family-Specific Variables Explains the Presence of Child Insomnia during COVID-19: A Key Response to the Current Debate. International Journal of Environmental Research and Public Health (IF-2020: 3.39).

2. Materials and Method

How were the participants recruited? Is there not a selection bias?

4. Discussion

Major Concern :

Discuss the prevalence results and key factors in relation to other articles on the subject.

Minor Concern :

·      Line 248-262 : Linking screen exposure in the evening to sleep and daytime behaviour:

Cavalli, E., Royce, A., Chaussoy, L., Herbillon, V., Franco, P., Putois, B. (2021). Screen exposure exacerbates ADHD symptoms indirectly through increased sleep disturbance. Sleep Medicine, 83(4). (IF-2019: 3.6)

·        “Regarding the home environment, parents reported an increase in electronic devices 236 use (not related to schooling),”

·       What is the link between increased screen use in relation to confinement and not schooling?

·       “In Australia, a study on an adolescent” Please, write the reference of the study.

 

5. Conclusion

I advise to focus only on the main contribution of this study which is the objective measurement

6. References Recommendation

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Author Response

We are very grateful for all your precise comments. Please see the attachment for the response. 

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Round 2

Reviewer 2 Report

Thank you for this new version. You have considerably improved the manuscript by your thorough analyse of the literature on the subject. I just suggest a final check of the English by a native speaker.

Best regards,