Health-Related Quality of Life Assessments by Children and Adolescents with Sickle Cell Disease and Their Parents in Portugal
Round 1
Reviewer 1 Report
This paper by Dr. Abadesso and colleagues provides the results from a quality-of-life survey of children with SCD and their parents in Portugal. It is generally well performed. There Is not a lot that is new compared to the many previous papers on this topic, but it will represent a useful addition to the literature. I have only a few minor comments for revisions.
- The title does not capture the true focus or full impacts of the paper. I suggest changing it to Health-Related Quality of Life assessments by children and adolescents in Portugal with Sickle Cell Disease and by their parents.
- The blue color in Fig. 1 should be changed (likely to a lighter more transparent color) to make the writing more visible.
- Graphic 1 needs more explanation.
- The authors should expand the Discussion to make it more clear how the current results differ from and/or complement those of prior studies.
Author Response
Thank you for your comments/suggestions. Reply is written in red:
- The title does not capture the true focus or full impacts of the paper. I suggest changing it to Health-Related Quality of Life assessments by children and adolescents in Portugal with Sickle Cell Disease and by their parents. – we introduced a modification of the title as requested
- The blue color in Fig. 1 should be changed (likely to a lighter more transparent color) to make the writing more visible. – Done
- Graphic 1 needs more explanation. – this graphic shows the progressive decline of the scores with increasing age (it is explained in the text)
- The authors should expand the Discussion to make it more clear how the current results differ from and/or complement those of prior studies. – We introduced some edits to the discussion to improve /make more perceptible the comparison with other studies. Our data cannot explain some differences, but we will focus on these issues in subsequent research.
Reviewer 2 Report
It would be nice in discussion to comment the results not only repeat them again. In lines 308 - 313 authors presented slightly different results from others. What the is the commentary?
Author Response
Thank you for your comments/suggestions! Answer to the comments in red:
- It would be nice in discussion to comment the results not only repeat them again. In lines 308 - 313 authors presented slightly different results from others. What the is the commentary? - We introduced some edits to the discussion to improve /make more perceptible the comparison with other studies. Our data cannot explain some differences, but we will focus on these issues in subsequent research.