Monitoring Commercial Starter Culture Development in Presence of Red Grape Pomace Powder to Produce Polyphenol-Enriched Fresh Ovine Cheeses at Industrial Scale Level
Round 1
Reviewer 1 Report
Dear Authors,
In my opinion this article can be published after minor revision.
Please follow this amendments:
Line 260: change Figura 3 to Figure 3
Lines 320-21: "These observations are not surprising". Please remove it. I think this sentence will be better if you write "The addition of vegetable by-products to dairy products confirmed the favorable influence their sensory attributes".
Line 329: The obtained results revealed... then it will be more professional.
Lines 334-35: Please mention what kind of further studies are necessary to investigate the beneficial effect of this novel cheese on human health.
Author Response
Answers to Reviewer 1:
Dear Authors,
In my opinion this article can be published after minor revision.
- Thanks a lot for your positive response. All your suggestions were considered and the changes in the text were highlighted in yellow.
Please follow this amendments:
Line 260: change Figura 3 to Figure 3
- Changed (L279).
Lines 320-21: "These observations are not surprising". Please remove it. I think this sentence will be better if you write "The addition of vegetable by-products to dairy products confirmed the favorable influence their sensory attributes".
- Thanks for this suggestion. The sentence was modified to address your request (L344-345).
Line 329: The obtained results revealed... then it will be more professional.
- Replaced (L353).
Lines 334-35: Please mention what kind of further studies are necessary to investigate the beneficial effect of this novel cheese on human health.
- Added (L358-359).
Author Response File: Author Response.docx
Reviewer 2 Report
The paper “Monitoring Commercial Starter Culture Development in Presence of Red Grape Pomace Powder to Produce Polyphenol-Enriched Fresh Ovine Cheeses at Industrial Scale Level” reports the industrialization of the process of GPP-enriched cheese making using commercial starter culture demonstrating the persistence of the starter culture, the increase in total phenolic content of the produced cheese, and the positive cheese evaluation by judges according to sensorial tests. The paper is well written, interesting, and easy to read. Despite I suggest to authors the following minor comments to improve the paper. I recommend the publication after minor revision:
Line 43: add the possible effect on soil microorganisms
Line 82: change “dried” to “freeze-dried”
Line 84: check the sentence and “respectively”
Line 87: add reference
Line 74: briefly add the procedure, in particular concerning the temperature used, important to respect polyphenols properties.
Line 92: add the primers used
Line 152: add the primers used
Line 203: add “coccus shaped” before “cells”
Line 208: add company of the ladder
Line 222: change “Listeria” to “L.”
Lines 226, 240: change “log to Log”
Line 290: change “Grape pomace powder” to “GPP”
Author Response
Answers to Reviewer 2:
The paper “Monitoring Commercial Starter Culture Development in Presence of Red Grape Pomace Powder to Produce Polyphenol-Enriched Fresh Ovine Cheeses at Industrial Scale Level” reports the industrialization of the process of GPP-enriched cheese making using commercial starter culture demonstrating the persistence of the starter culture, the increase in total phenolic content of the produced cheese, and the positive cheese evaluation by judges according to sensorial tests. The paper is well written, interesting, and easy to read. Despite I suggest to authors the following minor comments to improve the paper. I recommend the publication after minor revision:
- Thanks a lot for your positive response. All your suggestions were considered and the changes in the text were highlighted in green.
Line 43: add the possible effect on soil microorganisms
- This information has been added (LX45). A new references has been added in the text (L45) and in the references list (L403-404).
Line 82: change “dried” to “freeze-dried”
- Changed (L88).
Line 84: check the sentence and “respectively”
- We apologize for the mistake. The word "respectively" has been deleted (L91).
Line 87: add reference
- A new references has been added in the text (L93) and in the references list (L435-437).
Line 74: briefly add the procedure, in particular concerning the temperature used, important to respect polyphenols properties.
- We agree with your comment and the sentence was modified to address your request (L77-80).
Line 92: add the primers used
- Added (L100-102).
Line 152: add the primers used
- Added (L167-168).
Line 203: add “coccus shaped” before “cells”
- Added (L219).
Line 208: add company of the ladder
- Added (L224-225).
Line 222: change “Listeria” to “L.”
- Changed (L238).
Lines 226, 240: change “log to Log”
- Changed (L242,259).
Line 290: change “Grape pomace powder” to “GPP”
AU. Changed (312).
Author Response File: Author Response.docx