Correction: Flynn et al. Introducing and Familiarising Older Adults Living with Dementia and Their Caregivers to Virtual Reality. Int. J. Environ. Res. Public Health 2022, 19, 16343
1. Error in Figures and Tables
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- Caption changed from “television” to “a television” (Figure 2, p. 5).
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- “SP” changed to “caregiver” (Figure 5, p. 11).
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- Caption changed to “themes and corresponding subthemes” (Figure 5, p. 11).
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- “Encorporate” changed to “Incorporate” (p. 17).
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- “real-time” changed to “real time” (p. 17).
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- “Providing” changed to “Provide” (p. 17).
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- “dementia and caregiver” changed to “dementia and caregivers” (p. 18).
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- “set up” changed to “set-up” (p. 18).
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- “Acknowledging” changed to “Acknowledge” (p. 18).
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- “Discuss people living with dementias and caregivers presumptions of VR before use” changed to “Discuss the presumptions of VR with people living with dementia and their caregivers before use” (p. 18).
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- “Have caregiver present during people living with dementia for reassurance and support” changed to “Have the caregiver present when people living with dementia are using VR for reassurance and support” (p. 18).
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- “for the people living with dementia” change to “for people living with dementia”
2. Addition of an Author’s ORCID
3. Amended References
4. Text Corrections
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- “pre-requisite” to “prerequisite” (abstract, p1; Section 3, para 1, p. 11; Section 7, para 1, p. 18).
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- “individualized” to “individualised” (Section 1, para 1, p. 1; Section 3.3, para 1, p. 12)
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- “toward” to “towards” (Section 1, para 2, p. 2).
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- “prioritized” to “prioritised” (Section 1, para 3, p. 2).
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- “familiarize” to “familiarise” (Section 1, para 4, lines 3 and 10, p. 2).
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- “utilized” to “utilised” (Section 2.2, para 5, p. 4).
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- “trialing” to “trialling” (Section 2.1, para 2, p. 3; Section 2.4, para 1, p. 8).
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- “fieldnotes” to “field notes” (Section 2.5, para 1, p. 9; Section 2.7, para 1, p. 10, Section 3.1, para 2, p. 11, Section 3.3, para 4, p. 14).
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- “minimize“ to “minimise” (Section 2.6, para 1, p. 9; Section 2.8, para 3, p. 10).
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- “familiarizing” to “familiarising” (Section 2.7, para 1, p. 10).
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- “rigor” to “rigour“ (Section 2.7, para 3, p. 10).
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- “person-centered” to “person-centred” (Section 2.8, para 3, p. 10).
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- “verbalizations” to “verbalisations” (Section 3.1, para 1, p. 11; Section 4, para 2, p. 14).
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- “personalization” to “personalisation” (Section 3.1, para 1, p. 11).
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- “swiveling” to “swivelling” (Section 3.2, para 2, p. 12).
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- “familiarization” to “familiarisation” (Section 3.2, para 4, p. 12).
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- “real-time” to “real time” (Section 3.3, para 2 and 4, p. 13).
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- “mobilization” to “mobilisation” (Section 4, para 9, p. 16).
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- “individuals” to “individual’s” (Section 1, para 3, p. 2).
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- “caregiver” to “caregivers” (Section 1, para 4, p. 2; Section 1, para 6, p. 3; Section 2.1, para 2, lines 3 and 6, p. 3; Section 2.2, para 5, p. 4; Section 2.3, para 1, p. 7; Section 2.3, para 2, p. 7; Section 2.5, para 1, line 11, p. 9; Section 2.6, para 1, line 1, para 2, lines 1 and 9, p. 9; Section 3.1, para 1, lines 2 and 12, p. 11; Section 3.2, para 1, p. 12; Section 3.2, para 3, p. 12; Section 3.2, para 4, lines 2 and 14, p. 12; Section 3.3, para 3, lines 7 and 12, p. 13; Section 4, para 6, line 9, p. 15; Section 4, para 9, p. 16; Section 6, para 1, p. 18).
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- “Having the caregiver involved” to “Having caregivers involved” (Section 2.3, para 1, line 7, p. 7).
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- “caregivers” to “caregivers’” (Section 2.5, para 1, lines 5 and 12, p. 9).
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- “dementias’” to “dementia’s” (Section 2.5, para 1, line 7, p. 9).
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- “environment” to “environments” (Section 2.6, para 1, p. 9).
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- “caregiver” to “their caregivers’” (Section 2.7, para 2, p. 10).
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- “VE’s” to “VEs” (Section 3.1, para 1, p. 11; Section 6, para 1, p. 18).
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- “of the people living with dementia” to “people living with dementia” (Section 3.2, para 2, line 9, p. 12, Section 3.3, para 1, p. 12; Section 3.3, para 3, p. 13; Section 3.3, para 5, p. 13; Section 3.4, para 1, p. 14; Section 4, Para 5, p. 15; Section 4, Para 6, p. 15).
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- “the caregiver’s” to “their caregiver’s” (Section 3.3, para 4, line 4, p. 12).
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- “as a co-facilitator” to “as co-facilitators” (Section 3.3, para 5, p. 13).
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- “OT’s” to “OTs” (Section 4, para 5, p. 15).
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- “caregivers” to “their caregivers’” (Section 4, para 8, p. 16).
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- “experience” to “experiences” (Section 4, para 8 and 9, p. 16).
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- “was” to “were” (Section 4, para 9, p. 16)
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- “and facilitate” to “and can facilitate” (Section 1, para 2, p. 2).
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- “and inspire” to “and can inspire” (Section 1, para 4, p. 2).
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- “generalfunctionality” to “general functionality” (Section 1, para 5, p. 2).
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- “well-being” to “wellbeing” (Section 2.1, para 2, p. 3).
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- “consists” to “consisted” (Section 2.2, para 1, p. 3).
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- “Furthermore, the lead researcher, who is a qualified Occupational Therapist (OT), using her professional judgement considered the visual and auditory content of commercial active alternatives to be overly stimulating and complex, and the interactions within VR were not adaptable which contradicted the open-ended and exploratory nature of technology probes proposed in the literature [42].” amended to “Furthermore, the lead researcher, who is a qualified Occupational Therapist (OT), using her professional judgement, considered the visual and auditory content of commercial active alternatives to be overly stimulating and complex. In addition, the interactions within VR were not adaptable, which contradicts the open-ended and exploratory nature of technology probes proposed in the literature” (Section 2.2, para 2, p. 4).
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- “PAR group were” to “PAR group was” (Section 2.3, para 1, p. 7).
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- “except for one [PwD7] who turned 60 years during the project” changed to “except for one person living with dementia who turned 60 years during the project” (Section 2.3, para 2, p. 7).
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- “In terms of VR experience, five people living with dementia and their caregivers stated they had seen VR but not used it personally, seven people living with dementia and their caregiver reported they had previously tried VR albeit, several years previous and only passively through less interactive headsets, whilst six people living with dementia and their caregivers stated that they had no prior knowledge of VR” amended to “In terms of VR experience, five people living with dementia and their caregivers stated they had seen VR but not used it personally, seven people living with dementia and their caregiver had tried passive VR (involving less interactive headsets) several years ago, whilst six people living with dementia and their caregivers stated that they had no prior knowledge of VR” (Section 2.4, para 2, p. 8).
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- Bracket added “(Supplementary S3 and S4)” (Section 2.5, para 1, p. 9).
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- “important; the” to “important, the” (Section 2.5, para 1, p. 9).
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- “It also” to “This approach also” (Section 2.7, para 3, p. 10).
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- “care settings, and” to “care settings and” (Section 2.8, para 1, p. 10).
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- “They explored participants’ experiences beyond their diagnoses of dementia to explore the interplay between the physical, mental, and social functioning of people living with dementia and how these influenced their experience of VR” changed to “They explored people with dementia’s experiences beyond their diagnoses, to explore the interplay between their physical, mental, and social functioning and how these influenced their experience of VR” (Section 2.8, para 2, p. 10).
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- “data..” changed to “data.” (Section 2.8, para 2, line 6, p. 10).
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- Removed duplicate sentence “To minimise researcher bias, a summary of the finding was presented to people living with dementia and their caregivers [64].” (Section 2.8, para 3, line 5, p. 10).
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- “was alluded” to “were alluded” (Section 3.1, para 2, p. 11).
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- “In contrast to positive” to “In contrast to the positive” (Section 3.1, para 4, p. 12)
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- Removed “[REF]” (Section 3.1, para 4, p. 12).
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- “the people living with dementia” to “people living with dementia” (Section 2.5, para 1, p. 9; Section 3.1, para 1, p. 11; Section 3.3, para 3, p. 13, Section 3.4, para 1, p. 14, Section 4, Para 6, p. 15, Section 4, Para 9, p. 16).
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- “peopleliving” to “people living” (Section 3.3, para 1, p. 12).
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- “capabilities “It’s” to “capabilities, “It’s” (Section 3.3, para 3, p. 13).
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- “ensured the abilities” to “ensured that the abilities” (Section 3.3, para 3, p. 13).
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- “Three people living with dementia verbalized that the presence of the caregiver was useful” to “Three people living with dementia verbalised that their caregiver’s presence was useful” (Section 3.3, para 4, p. 13).
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- Removed “[1,3]” (Section 3.3, para 4, p. 14).
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- Removed “set up the” (Section 3.3, para 5, line 4, p. 13).
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- “the preferences of the people living with dementia but, ” to “the preferences of not only people living with dementia but” (Section 3.3, para 5, p. 13).
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- “both of” to “all of” (Section 3.3, para 5, p. 14).
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- considered as “gamers”” to “considered gamers” (Section 3.4, para 1, p. 14).
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- “people living with dementia and their caregivers’” to “people living with dementia and their caregiver’s” (Section 3.4, para 1, line 14, p. 14).
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- “:” to “,” (Section 3.4, para 1, line 6, p. 14).
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- “Understanding VR sparked interest in its future use for people living with dementia [1–9]” changed to “Understanding VR sparked interest in its future use for people living with dementia” (Section 3.4, para 2, p. 14).
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- “the VR FOUNDations” changed to “VR FOUNDations” (Section 4, para 2, line 1, p. 14).
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- “compliments” to “complements” (Section 4, para 5, p. 15).
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- “acknowledgment” to “acknowledgement” (Section 4, para 5, p. 15).
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- “fostered autonomous” to “fostered the autonomous” (Section 4, para 5, p. 15).
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- “and which acknowledges people living with dementia’s wider sociotechnical system influencing VR implementation” to “and acknowledges the wider sociotechnical system influencing VR implementation for people living with dementia” (Section 4, para 6, p. 15).
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- “advocated” to “advocate” (Section 4, para 7, p. 15).
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- “of bespoke VR application” to “of a bespoke VR application” (Section 4, para 8, p. 16).
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- “present” to “lead to” (Section 5, para 1, p. 17).
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- “presented in” to “; these are presented in” (Section 5, para 2, p. 17).
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- “Outside of informing technology probe research, the findings can influence broader VR design research. This study provides valuable insights into how a VR technology probe may be used in dementia care research” changed to “Outside of informing technology probe research, the findings also influence broader VR design research by providing valuable insights into how a VR technology probe may be used in dementia care research.” (Section 5, para 2, p. 17).
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- Removed “In”” (Institutional Review Board Statement, p. 19)
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- “Gaver et al. [36] technology” to “Gaver et al. [36], technology” (Section 1, para 4, p. 2).
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- “VEs, is” to “VEs is” (Section 1, para 4, p. 2).
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- “thus,” to “, thus” (Section 1, para 5, p. 3).
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- “dementia, and” to “dementia and” (Section 2.1, para 1, p. 3).
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- “Games Developer, iteratively” to “Games Developer iteratively” (Section 2.2, para 4, p. 4).
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- “dementia, who” to “dementia who” (Section 2.2, para 4, p. 4).
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- “advisory group participated” to “advisory group, participated” (Section 2.2, para 4, p. 4).
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- “VR FOUNDations, consisted” to “VR FOUNDations consisted” (Section 2.2, para 5, p. 4).
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- “who” to “, who” (Section 2.2, para 6, p. 4; Section 2.4, para 1, p. 8; Section 4, para 3, line 5 and 10, p. 15; Section 4, para 7, p. 16).
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- “whereby,“ to “, whereby” (Section 2.3, para 2, p. 7; Section 3.2, para 2, p. 12; Section 3.4, para 1, p. 14).
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- “with” to “, with” (Section 2.4, para 1, p. 8).
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- “analysis” to “analysis,” (Section 3, para 1, p. 11).
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- “albeit” to“, albeit” (Section 3.1, para 1, p. 11; Section 4, para 9, p. 16).
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- “functioning” to “functioning,” (Section 3.2, para 2, p. 12).
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- “set up” to “set-up,” (Section 3.3, para 5, line 3, p. 13).
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- “while,” to “, while” (Section 3.4, para 1, p. 14).
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- “probes” to “probes,” (Section 4, para 1, p. 14).
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- “caregivers, but for” to “caregivers but for” (Section 4, para 1, p. 14).
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- “It is noteworthy, that” to “It is noteworthy that” (Section 4, para 3, p. 15).
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- “responses” to “responses,” (Section 4, para 3, lines 4, p. 15).
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- “and in particular,” to “, and in particular” (Section 4, para 8, p. 16).
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- “for most,” to “, for most” (Section 4, para 8, p. 16).
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- “by using this approach” to “by using this approach,” (Section 4, para 9, p. 16).
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- “which” to “, which” (Section 4, para 9, p. 16; Section 5, para 1, lines 7 and 10, p. 17).
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- “caregivers and” to “caregivers, and” (Section 5, para 1, p. 17).
5. Reporting of Findings
6. Acknowledgements
Reference
- Flynn, A.; Barry, M.; Qi Koh, W.; Reilly, G.; Brennan, A.; Redfern, S.; Casey, D. Introducing and Familiarising Older Adults Living with Dementia and Their Caregivers to Virtual Reality. Int. J. Environ. Res. Public Health 2022, 19, 16343. [Google Scholar] [CrossRef] [PubMed]
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Flynn, A.; Barry, M.; Koh, W.Q.; Reilly, G.; Brennan, A.; Redfern, S.; Casey, D. Correction: Flynn et al. Introducing and Familiarising Older Adults Living with Dementia and Their Caregivers to Virtual Reality. Int. J. Environ. Res. Public Health 2022, 19, 16343. Int. J. Environ. Res. Public Health 2024, 21, 911. https://doi.org/10.3390/ijerph21070911
Flynn A, Barry M, Koh WQ, Reilly G, Brennan A, Redfern S, Casey D. Correction: Flynn et al. Introducing and Familiarising Older Adults Living with Dementia and Their Caregivers to Virtual Reality. Int. J. Environ. Res. Public Health 2022, 19, 16343. International Journal of Environmental Research and Public Health. 2024; 21(7):911. https://doi.org/10.3390/ijerph21070911
Chicago/Turabian StyleFlynn, Aisling, Marguerite Barry, Wei Qi Koh, Gearóid Reilly, Attracta Brennan, Sam Redfern, and Dympna Casey. 2024. "Correction: Flynn et al. Introducing and Familiarising Older Adults Living with Dementia and Their Caregivers to Virtual Reality. Int. J. Environ. Res. Public Health 2022, 19, 16343" International Journal of Environmental Research and Public Health 21, no. 7: 911. https://doi.org/10.3390/ijerph21070911
APA StyleFlynn, A., Barry, M., Koh, W. Q., Reilly, G., Brennan, A., Redfern, S., & Casey, D. (2024). Correction: Flynn et al. Introducing and Familiarising Older Adults Living with Dementia and Their Caregivers to Virtual Reality. Int. J. Environ. Res. Public Health 2022, 19, 16343. International Journal of Environmental Research and Public Health, 21(7), 911. https://doi.org/10.3390/ijerph21070911