Methodological Foundations of the Risk of the Stock Markets of Developed and Developing Countries in the Conditions of the Crisis
, Shakizada Niyazbekova 3,4,*, Lyudmila Borsch 5, Mir Abdul Kayum Jallal 6, Nataliya Apatova 7, Ardak Nurpeisova 8, Alexander Semenov 9 and Ayagoz Zhansagimova 10Round 1
Reviewer 1 Report
I think that this is an interesting article. I hope that my comments will be of some help for the authors to improve the article.
(1) Literature has not been extensively considered. The paper demonstrates an inadequate understanding of the relevant literature in the field and thus an appropriate range of literature sources and significant works are ignored.
(2) The results need expansion — The results should be discussed and compared with other studies. Especially, the authors should clearly explain the similarity and differences between their results and those of previous research.
(3) The paper must identify clearly any implications for research, practice and/or society. Thus, the paper must bridge the gap between theory and practice. How can the research be used in practice (economic and commercial impact), to influence public policy, in research? What is the impact on society? Are these implications consistent with the findings and conclusions of the paper?
Author Response
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Title Methodological Foundations of the Risk of the Stock Markets of Developed and Developing Countries in the Conditions of the Crisis
Good day, Dears REWIEVER 1, 2 , 3
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WE FIXED The results were discussed and compared with other studies!
THE CONCLUSIONS ARE AGREED
THE CURRENT STATE IS PRESENTED, THE LIST OF REFERENCES HAS BEEN REVISED AND STRENGTHENED Added item
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2 REWIEVER
THE REFERENCES HAS BEEN CORRECTED, REVISED AND STRENGTHENED
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THE CURRENT STATE IS PRESENTED, THE LIST OF REFERENCES HAS BEEN REVISED AND STRENGTHENED
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Formation of a modern financial market model,
The main challenges of the time in the development of stock markets,
Development of the stock market in Russia
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Thank you! Sincerely, co-authors!
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Reviewer 2 Report
The topic of the paper is very interesting for finance researchers.
Minor revision:
Literature Review: The paper needs more literature review for the topic.
Author Response
Manuscript ID jrfm-1410040
Type
Article
Title Methodological Foundations of the Risk of the Stock Markets of Developed and Developing Countries in the Conditions of the Crisis
Good day, Dears REWIEVER 1, 2 , 3
1 REWIEVER
WE FIXED The results were discussed and compared with other studies!
THE CONCLUSIONS ARE AGREED
THE CURRENT STATE IS PRESENTED, THE LIST OF REFERENCES HAS BEEN REVISED AND STRENGTHENED Added item
English professional translated
2 REWIEVER
THE REFERENCES HAS BEEN CORRECTED, REVISED AND STRENGTHENED
English professional translated
3 REWIEVER
THE CURRENT STATE IS PRESENTED, THE LIST OF REFERENCES HAS BEEN REVISED AND STRENGTHENED
Added item
Formation of a modern financial market model,
The main challenges of the time in the development of stock markets,
Development of the stock market in Russia
English professional translated
Thank you! Sincerely, co-authors!
Author Response File: Author Response.docx
Reviewer 3 Report
The paper covers an interesting topic related to Stock Exchanges. It tries to follow the usual pattern but some of the parts/sections are not well achieved. An important section is the state of the art of the topic that is not presented and should be. The list of references is very small even if the number of articles written in the list of references is reasonable. All the sections can be improved, as well as the English language and the subtitles of the sections and notes to the tables and graphics..
Author Response
Manuscript ID jrfm-1410040
Type
Article
Title Methodological Foundations of the Risk of the Stock Markets of Developed and Developing Countries in the Conditions of the Crisis
Good day, Dears REWIEVER 1, 2 , 3
1 REWIEVER
WE FIXED The results were discussed and compared with other studies!
THE CONCLUSIONS ARE AGREED
THE CURRENT STATE IS PRESENTED, THE LIST OF REFERENCES HAS BEEN REVISED AND STRENGTHENED Added item
English professional translated
2 REWIEVER
THE REFERENCES HAS BEEN CORRECTED, REVISED AND STRENGTHENED
English professional translated
3 REWIEVER
THE CURRENT STATE IS PRESENTED, THE LIST OF REFERENCES HAS BEEN REVISED AND STRENGTHENED
Added item
Formation of a modern financial market model,
The main challenges of the time in the development of stock markets,
Development of the stock market in Russia
English professional translated
Thank you! Sincerely, co-authors!
Author Response File: Author Response.docx
Round 2
Reviewer 3 Report
Even the authors adopt forms of writing that are not the ones I would adopt, in my opinion the paper can be published as it is. I recommend a final revision of the English text befora publishing.
