Tuning the Electronic Structures of Mo-Based Sulfides/Selenides with Biomass-Derived Carbon for Hydrogen Evolution Reaction and Sodium-Ion Batteries
Round 1
Reviewer 1 Report
Comments and Suggestions for AuthorsThis review is well organized and sounding. In my opinion can be published in its present form.
The review entitled “uning the Electronic Structure of Mo-Based Sulfides/Selenides with Biomass-Derived Carbon for Hydrogen Evolution Reaction and Sodium-Ion Batteries” discusses the limitations of MoS₂/MoSe₂ electrode materials in hydrogen evolution reactions (HER) and sodium-ion batteries (SIBs) applications, introducing biomass-derived carbon (BMC) as a natural support for loading MoS₂/MoSe2 for energy storage and conversion and for catalytic reactions. For this latter application, the authors underlined that carbon catalysts based on biomass have important performance. In addition, this review lists the sources and methods to obtain BMC, and suggests approaches for incorporating BMC with MoS₂/MoSe₂ whose composites show improved performances. The review also analyses some future perspective and challenges for the application of BMC/MoS₂ and BMC/MoSe₂ materials. 18/100 references belong to Yang, J., author of the present review, thus demonstrating that the authors have already produced in this relevant field.Tables and figures are appropriate. Comments on the Quality of English Language
The language is fine
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Comments 1: This review is well organized and sounding. In my opinion can be published in its present form.
The review entitled “Tuning the Electronic Structure of Mo-Based Sulfides/Selenides with Biomass-Derived Carbon for Hydrogen Evolution Reaction and Sodium-Ion Batteries” discusses the limitations of MoS₂/MoSe₂ electrode materials in hydrogen evolution reactions (HER) and sodium-ion batteries (SIBs) applications, introducing biomass-derived carbon (BMC) as a natural support for loading MoS₂/MoSe2 for energy storage and conversion and for catalytic reactions. For this latter application, the authors underlined that carbon catalysts based on biomass have important performance. In addition, this review lists the sources and methods to obtain BMC, and suggests approaches for incorporating BMC with MoS₂/MoSe₂ whose composites show improved performances. The review also analyses some future perspective and challenges for the application of BMC/MoS₂ and BMC/MoSe₂ materials. 18/100 references belong to Yang, J., author of the present review, thus demonstrating that the authors have already produced in this relevant field. Tables and figures are appropriate.
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Response 1: We sincerely appreciate the reviewer’s high praise and recognition of our work. Our research group has been dedicated to the structural regulation of transition metal selenides and breakthroughs in their electrochemical performance, with several research and review papers already published. Moving forward, we will continue to tackle challenges in the preparation and application of these materials. This viewpoint is planned to highlight the fundamentals relevant to the topic, including the electronic modulation and structural engineering of Mo-based sulfides/selenides, as a complement to the reviews on SIBs and HER that have recently been published. Finally, we offer our opinion on the challenges and issues that may arise in the future, aiming to advance the application prospects of BMC/MoS₂ and BMC/MoSe₂ materials.
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Point 1: The language is fine. |
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Response 1: We greatly appreciate your expert opinions on our manuscript. Your insightful opinions can help improve the quality of our article. |
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Reviewer 2 Report
Comments and Suggestions for AuthorsIn this manuscript, the author tuning the electronic structure of Mo-based sulfides/selenides with biomass-derived carbon for hydrogen evolution reaction and sodium-ion batteries. The manuscript should be accepted after addressing the following issues;
1) In the abstract, the authors should add more information related to the main findings and aspects, which studied in the review article.
2) In each section, the authors should add a table to improve the understanding and worth of the manuscript.
3) The authors should add a complete section of the synthesis and characterization of 2D and TMDs materials.
4) There are new materials such as MXene and MOF, the authors also added details related to the Mo-based composites with these materials.
5) The authors also add more information related to the mechanism of SIB and HER device; how this composite improves the performance supporting some chemical reactions etc.
6) In Figure 4, the authors studied the heterostructure-type materials in SIB and HER devices. The Interface quality affects the efficiency of SIB and HER devices.
7) Most of the references look old, the authors should modify the references and add references from the last three years
8) There are many similar works reported in the previous literature, the authors should emphasize the novelty and better performance as compared to the previous work.
9) Some figure quality is low, the authors should improve it.
10) The authors should improve the language of the manuscript carefully.
Comments on the Quality of English LanguageThe authors should improve the language of the manuscript carefully.
Author Response
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Thank you very much for taking the time to review this manuscript. Please find the detailed responses below and the corresponding revisions/corrections highlighted/in track changes in the re-submitted files. |
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Comments 1: In this manuscript, the author tuning the electronic structure of Mo-based sulfides/selenides with biomass-derived carbon for hydrogen evolution reaction and sodium-ion batteries. The manuscript should be accepted after addressing the following issues; In the abstract, the authors should add more information related to the main findings and aspects, which studied in the review article.
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Response 1: Thanks for the comment. We added the main findings and aspects in the abstract. The specific changes are as follows: This review addresses the scientific challenges related to the development of electrode materials for HER and SIBs in electrochemical energy storage and conversion. It delves into the recent focus on the two-dimensional transition metal chalcogenides, particularly MoS₂ and MoSe₂, and the difficulties encountered in modulating their electronic structures when applied to HER and SIBs. The review proposes the use of eco-friendly and widely sourced biomass-derived carbon (BMC) as a supporting matrix, combining with MoS₂ and MoSe₂ to regulate their structure and enhance their electrocatalytic activity and sodium storage performance. Additionally, it highlights the existing challenges faced by these BMC/MoS₂ and BMC/MoSe₂ composites and offers insights into future developments.
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Comments 2: In each section, the authors should add a table to improve the understanding and worth of the manuscript. |
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Response 2: To facilitate organization and summarization, we have compiled tables of the literature on BMC/MoS₂ and BMC/MoSe₂ used for HER and SIBs, in accordance with the reviewers' suggestions.
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Response 10: We have carefully revised the entire manuscript to avoid grammatical and other language-related issues. |
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Reviewer 3 Report
Comments and Suggestions for AuthorsIn this manuscript, Pan et al. reviewed the incorporation of biomass-derived carbon to improve the structure of Mo-based sulfides and selenides, enhancing their electrocatalytic performance in HER (Hydrogen Evolution Reaction) and SIBs (Sodium-Ion Batteries). Currently, the preparation of two-dimensional transition metal chalcogenides and their electrochemical applications are a topical research area, and this review is likely to attract a broad range of potential readers engaged in this field. Based on these considerations, I would like to recommend its publication at the journal Catalysts. However, to improve the manuscript, some minor issues detailed below are suggested to be addressed.
1. Other applications of MoS2/MoSe2 can be incorporated into your introduction, which would strengthen the contextual foundation of your research on TMDs.
2. MoS2/MoSe2 have many application scenarios, so what makes the authors believe these materials are more suitable for HER and SIBs?
3. For Figure 2, what is the guiding significance of preparing BMC into materials with different dimensions for this work?
4. How can BMC regulate the electronic structure of MoS2/MoSe2?
5. Machine learning has also been a research hotspot in recent years for assisting in the preparation and screening of materials. Could the authors provide some relevant connections to this work in the conclusion section?
Author Response
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Thank you very much for taking the time to review this manuscript. Please find the detailed responses below and the corresponding revisions/corrections highlighted/in track changes in the re-submitted files. |
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Is the work well organized and comprehensively described? |
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Is the English used correct and readable? |
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Comments 1: In this manuscript, Pan et al. reviewed the incorporation of biomass-derived carbon to improve the structure of Mo-based sulfides and selenides, enhancing their electrocatalytic performance in HER (Hydrogen Evolution Reaction) and SIBs (Sodium-Ion Batteries). Currently, the preparation of two-dimensional transition metal chalcogenides and their electrochemical applications are a topical research area, and this review is likely to attract a broad range of potential readers engaged in this field. Based on these considerations, I would like to recommend its publication at the journal Catalysts. However, to improve the manuscript, some minor issues detailed below are suggested to be addressed. Other applications of MoS2/MoSe2 can be incorporated into your introduction, which would strengthen the contextual foundation of your research on TMDs.
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Response 1: Thanks for the comment. We have added the other application in the revised manuscript. The specific changes are as follows: MoS₂ and MoSe₂, as key members of the TMD family, exhibit versatile properties that make them valuable in various fields beyond electrochemical energy storage, such as optoelectronics, sensors, flexible electronics, lubricants and so on [31]. For example, MoS₂ and MoSe₂ are also utilized in chemical and biological sensors due to their large surface area and high sensitivity to environmental changes. They have been used to detect gases, biomolecules, and other analytes with high sensitivity and selectivity.
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Comments 2: MoS2/MoSe2 have many application scenarios, so what makes the authors believe these materials are more suitable for HER and SIBs? |
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Response 2: Thanks for the comment. MoS₂ and MoSe₂ are highly versatile materials with a wide range of applications, but several intrinsic properties make them particularly well-suited for hydrogen evolution reactions (HER) and sodium-ion batteries (SIBs). First, MoS₂ and MoSe₂ have a layered structure that provides a high surface area and exposes a large number of edge sites, which are highly active for catalysis. For HER, the edge sites in these materials are known to facilitate the adsorption and reduction of protons to hydrogen, making them efficient catalysts. The layered structure of MoS₂ and MoSe₂ also plays a key role in SIB applications. These materials provide well-defined ion diffusion pathways between layers, which can accommodate large Na⁺ ions. The interlayer spacing of MoS₂ and MoSe₂ can be adjusted or expanded, allowing better accommodation of sodium ions, which are larger than lithium ions. Second, both materials possess semiconducting properties that can be modulated by defect engineering, doping, or phase transitions (e.g., 2H to 1T phase). This tunability allows for the optimization of their electronic conductivity and catalytic activity, which are critical for improving HER efficiency. MoS₂ and MoSe₂ exhibit high theoretical capacities for sodium-ion storage due to their ability to undergo reversible conversion reactions with Na⁺ ions. Additionally, their structural integrity can be preserved over multiple charge/discharge cycles, making them highly stable as electrode materials for SIBs. Finally, the earth abundance and cost-effectiveness is also the advantage. |
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Comments 5: Machine learning has also been a research hotspot in recent years for assisting in the preparation and screening of materials. Could the authors provide some relevant connections to this work in the conclusion section? |
Response 5: We have accordingly modifiedto emphasize this point. Machine learning algorithms can analyze large datasets to identify promising compositions or synthesis methods for MoS₂ and MoSe₂. This can speed up the discovery of optimal material formulations for enhanced performance in SIBs and HER. The models can predict the properties and performance of different MoS₂ and MoSe₂ materials based on their structural and compositional features. This can guide experimentalists in selecting the most promising candidates.
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Round 2
Reviewer 2 Report
Comments and Suggestions for AuthorsAccepted in the present form
Comments on the Quality of English LanguageOkay