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Problem-Solving Design-Platform Model Based on the Methodological Distinctiveness of Service Design

J. Open Innov. Technol. Mark. Complex. 2019, 5(4), 78; https://doi.org/10.3390/joitmc5040078
by Youngok Jeon
Reviewer 1: Anonymous
Reviewer 2: Anonymous
J. Open Innov. Technol. Mark. Complex. 2019, 5(4), 78; https://doi.org/10.3390/joitmc5040078
Submission received: 5 September 2019 / Revised: 25 September 2019 / Accepted: 27 September 2019 / Published: 5 October 2019
(This article belongs to the Special Issue Business Model Innovation)

Round 1

Reviewer 1 Report

The revised version of the manuscript has addressed in a very elegant way the previous comments and suggestions. Congratulations on the work developed. My final recommendation is the acceptance of the manuscript in its current version.

Author Response

Dear Reviewer I appreciate your careful guidance to my paper. I have gone through and made necessary revisions for language, grammar, and improved clarity. I will always keep your insightful instructions in my future research.

Reviewer 2 Report

The Authors have augmented the quality of the manuscript consistently. However, a couple of further improvements are still needed before it can be considered for publication:

p. 3, lines 97-101: this sentence is unclear. Moreover, what is the meaning of “true life cycle costs” in such a context? Studies on PSS life-cycle modelling have demonstrated that benefits in terms of environment, costs and customer satisfaction can be achieved prolonging the PSS’ life-cycle, not the product’ life cycle only (e.g. see: https://www.designsociety.org/download-publication/32055/product%E2%80%99s_life_cycle_modelling_for_eco-designing_product-service_systems). Several typos need to be corrected. For example, p. 3, line 108: “Kim, 2012, Kim & Lee, 2012”; p. 5, line 157: which yield guaranteed results,” … p. 12, Table 5: this reviewer suggests the Authors to better specify the differences between their contribution (i.e. Table 5) and the works of Dr. Haber (e.g. see table 4 in https://www.researchgate.net/profile/Nicolas_Haber/publication/317313162_Designing_Product-Service_Systems_A_Review_Towards_a_Unified_Approach/links/5ab0ddd8a6fdcc1bc0be7600/Designing-Product-Service-Systems-A-Review-Towards-a-Unified-Approach.pdf ). p. 13, lines 346-348: clarify this sentence. p.14, lines 364-369: this sentence is too long. It should be better to split it.

Author Response

Please find my responses to your comments in the attached file.

Author Response File: Author Response.pdf

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